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Hiccups Part Three

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Sorry for any errors! Enjoy part three! (Part four should be the last part!)

Once we got to Tappers, for the second time that day, Ralph ordered a tall glass of water. "Water? What help is that going to be?" Vanellope asked. "Well, another supposedly known cure for the hiccups is putting water in your mouth then tilting your head up towards the sky and swallowing it." Ralph explained to everyone. "What? That's never going to work!" Vanellope laughed. "Hey you never know! I say we try everything we can that may work at curing those hiccups." Tamora stated. "I hic agree. Pass me the water. Hic." I grabbed the water then said "Well, here goes nothing." I put a huge amount of water in my mouth, tilted my head towards the ceiling, and swallowed the water.  "Well?" Calhoun anxiously asked. "I don't think it hic. Yep didn't work." I sighed. These hiccups were rather annoying, and I was beginning to think that they'd never go away! "Haha. I knew your hiccup cure wouldn't work! My five dollars please?" Vanellope giggled madly as Ralph sighed and handed over the five dollars. "What?! You two bet?! Haven't you learned your lesson about betting, Wreck-It?" Tamora glared harshly at Ralph. "Uh-" Ralph began to say, but I decided to interrupt him before Tammy began to yell at him "It's ok Tammy. Lets focus on hic getting rid of these hiccups. Hic." "I have no ideas, Felix do you know anybody else who might know how to get rid of those hiccups?" Tamora asked me. Then I had an idea of who might. "I think I know someone!" I smiled. "Who?" Everyone asked, anxious to hear a reply. "Q'bert." I grinned.

When we finally got to my game, I ran up to the little guy as fast as I could. Everyone else raced to him. I could tell we scared the poor guy a little since he was peacefully walking when suddenly a huge group of people came barreling toward him. He jumped a little, but I yelled to him "#%^|  8@& $(;2!" which meant wait I have an important question. "@$/?" He replied which meant yes? "What are you saying?" Vanellope asked. "Shh Ill tell you when I'm done talking to him." I replied to her. "Um, um... }#]{^ } #*}+% =3^{& hic @:-9/?" I asked Q'bert. I was asking him if he knew how to cure hiccups. Q'bert nodded. "Oh thank god." I heard Tamora mumble. I guess Tamora took the nod as a he knew the cure. "47}^ %*^+ ={*#" He replied. "{*}]_!" I replied. "What did he say?" I could see the anxiousness in Tammy's bright blue eyes. "He said hold your hic breath." I smiled back to her. "Of course! Why didn't I think of that!" Calhoun laughed for the first time that day. "Here I hic go!" I smiled. I took a deep breath then puffed out my cheeks as I held my breath in. After a while, I really wanted to breath again but I held it in. I  had to get rid of these hiccups! My face began to turn blue. "Felix, Felix breath!" Tamora instructed. I shook my head, I couldn't give up I could still knew my hiccups were there. My world began to spin. "That's an order solider!" Calhoun barked. I finally couldn't take it anymore and air filled my lungs. I was panting! "Wow! They have to be gone. You held that breath in for like ten minutes!" Vanellope gasped. "Vanellope, it was a minute, not even." Ralph said to her. "Whatever, it felt like ten minutes." Vanellope sighed. "They are hic. Still not gone." I frowned. "I don't know what else we could do to get rid of these hiccups!" Tamora sighed. "Oh Tammy! I'm so sorry! I should have hic listened to you when you told me not to drink that full hic glass of root beer! Now my game is going to be hic unplugged! And it's all because of me! Where will hic we all go? What game can we all be put in? Hic. My game is the oldest game here, more then thirty hic years old now. And-" Tears began to stream down my face. I was so afraid, and I feel so stupid! All the great people in my game are being put in danger, no they are in danger. It's because of me, all because of that stupid bet I had to make with Ralph. I turned away from Tamora so that she couldn't see the tears streaming down my face. Calhoun knelt down to my level and I felt her hand grip my chin. She forced me to look her straight into her blue eyes. "Felix, everything is going to be alright. I haven't been the best supporter for the tough time your going through right now, and I'm sorry. At least I know that your going to be ok, and that you won't be trapped in your game when it is unplugged. Fix-it you can, I guess you can stay in Heros Duty with me." Vanellope began to laugh, Tamora rolled her eyes and continued "Ok? I think we just need to go home right now, and maybe you will sleep your hiccups away." I took my hand and wiped my tears away. I needed to stay strong, for Tammy, the nice land people, Ralph, Vanellope, basically everyone that I know. "Hic. Ok." I replied back. Calhoun and I said goodbye to Ralph and Vanellope and walked home. Even though Tamora made that inspiring and positive speech, the atmosphere was still depressing.
Part three of Hiccups! Sorry for any errors, enjoy! (:
Part One: [link]
Part Four: [link]

Read all the parts edited and changed a little, it's way better! [link]
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Thank you so much! I didn't even realize that! Just changed it (: